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 title: "ARRM: Accessibility Roles and Responsibilities Mapping"
 nav_title: "Roles and Responsibilities (ARRM)"
 doc-note-type: draft
-doc-note-message-md: This is an in-progress draft. We welcome comments via GitHub or email from the [links below](#helpimprove).
+doc-note-message-md: This is an in-progress draft. We welcome comments via GitHub or email from the [links below](#helpimprove). You are also welsome to join the ARRM Community Group @@link to contribute.
 
 lang: en   # Change "en" to the translated-language shortcode from https://www.iana.org/assignments/language-subtag-registry/language-subtag-registry
 last_updated: 2021-@@-@@   # Put the date of this translation YYYY-MM-DD (with month in the middle)
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 footer: >   # Translate words below, including "Date:" and "Editor:" Translate the Working Group name. Leave the Working Group acronym in English. Do *not* change the dates in the footer below.
    <p><strong>Status: Editors' DRAFT that is incomplete, unapproved, in progress </strong><strong>Date:</strong> Updated @@ Month 2021. First published Month 20@@. <!-- CHANGELOG. --></p>
-   <p><strong>Editors:</strong> @@name, @@name. <strong>Contributors:</strong> @@name, @@name, and <a href=”https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/@@wg/participants”>participants of the @@WG</a>. ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS lists additional contributors.</p>
+   <p><strong>Editors:</strong> @@name, @@name. <strong>Contributors:</strong> @@name, @@name, and <a href="https://www.w3.org/groups/wg/@@wg/participants">participants of the @@WG</a>. ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS lists additional contributors.</p>
    <p>Developed with the Accessibility Education and Outreach Working Group (<a href="http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/">EOWG</a>).</p>
 
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 ## Customizing ARRM for Your Situation
 
-ARRM also guides organizations that want to customize their own accessibility roles and responsibilities mapping, based on considerations in their organizations. The key tool for this is the:
+ARRM also guides organizations that want to customize their own accessibility roles and responsibilities mapping, based on considerations in their organizations. To facilitate this, ARRM includes:
 
-* **[ARRM Decision Tree@@](https://deploy-preview-9--wai-arrm.netlify.app/planning/arrm/decision-tree/)** provides steps for deciding which roles have which level responsibilities.
+* **[Deciding who is responsible](https://deploy-preview-9--wai-arrm.netlify.app/planning/arrm/decision-tree/)** that provides steps for deciding which roles have which level responsibilities.
 
 First, decide if you want to use the example [role definitions](roles), or use different roles for your project team.
 
-Next, for each success criteria (or your organization’s accessibility @@checkpoints), walk through the ARRM Decision Tree@@ to assign responsibilities.
+Next, for each success criteria (or your organization’s accessibility tasks), walk through the steps in 'Deciding who is responsible' to assign responsibilities.