New headline for services and focus areas and a new introduction. #12
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… purpose is to change the intented audience to be more in line with the rest of the DNA document
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Since that "a hybrid between..." isn't a mission statenent, I see now that a different phrasing is needed. |
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Your editor was a good sport and removed some nasty whitespaces 👍 The suggestion looks fine to me, I'm not sure I'm following on your comment about rephrasing? Actually, does that (a hybrid...) add any value at this point in the document or should it be removed? |
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The fact that we have tried to get it to fit in might indicate that it shouldn't be there... +1 for removing it. |
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The purpose is to change the intented audience to be more in line with the rest of the DNA document.
I think this section is still part of our DNA, but the intended reader was a bit unclear earlier. I think this is a small step in the right direction.
Note that my editor seems to have added some blank spaces, so some lines seem changed even though they are not. I have only altered the headline and the initial section text.