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lib.network: add ipv6 parser #318712

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assert lib.asserts.assertMsg (
builtins.length addr == 8
) "_parseNormalized expected to recieve normalized IPv6 address";
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) "_parseNormalized expected to recieve normalized IPv6 address";
) "_parseNormalized expects a normalized IPv6 address";

But what does "normalized" in this case even mean? I don't think the function name matches its purpose well.

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To address your questions:

Do I need to somehow hide the internal functions more than just underscoring them?

Yes currently they would all get exposed, you have to put them into a let binding to make them truly internal. Take a look at https://github.com/NixOS/nixpkgs/blob/master/lib/fileset/default.nix#L103 as an example.

Are the doc comments in the correct format (already existing files have different style)?

Some of them are some of them aren't, please take a look at the example

Do I need to pull the ipv4 parser implementation to merge them together? #299409

no, we should keep them separate and preferably go for small prs, e.g. once the parser is fine merge this pr and then do another v6 one for cidr related functions.

@woojiq woojiq force-pushed the lib-network-ipv6-parser branch 2 times, most recently from 8ad8940 to 5f1b84c Compare June 22, 2024 11:53
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woojiq commented Jun 22, 2024

@Janik-Haag @mweinelt I refactored the code and moved internal functions to internal.nix. Can you review again please?

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I think this is getting into shape. There are some smaller points left to do, and you should add a lot more comments explaining different parts, I think. This part of lib currently is very undocumented internally compared to others like lib.fileset or lib.generators.

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if 1 <= n && n <= ipv6Bits then
n
else
throw "${apiName}: IPv6 subnet should be in range [1;${toString ipv6Bits}], got ${toString n}";
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Uh, I don't think we want to pass around the function name here, this will only get more confusing to debug because your output would gaslight the user, once other functions rely on the ${apiName} function internally.

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api = "lib.network.ipv6.fromString";

splittedAddr = _ipv6.split api addr;
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Please remove the "api" part.

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emptyExpected =
if hasPrefix || hasSuffix then
2
else if hasInfix then
1
else
0;
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This should be moved in the same scope as the emptyCount definition

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ipv6Bits = 128;
ipv6Pieces = 8;
ipv6PieceBits = 16;
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We should link to the corresponding RFC definitions, and maybe write a comment explaining them, since these are magic numbers to anyone unfamiliar with networking.

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let
zeros = genList (_: "0") (ipv6Pieces - piecesNoEmptyLen);
in
if hasPrefix then zeros ++ piecesNoEmpty else piecesNoEmpty ++ zeros
else if hasInfix then
concatMap (
piece: if piece == "" then genList (_: "0") (ipv6Pieces - piecesNoEmptyLen) else [ piece ]
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We can reuse the zeros variable in line 68 in the concatMap function, because it's doing the same.

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let
splitted = strings.splitString "/" addr;
splittedLength = length splitted;
in
if splittedLength == 1 then # [ ip ]
{
address = parseIpv6FromString apiName addr;
prefixLength = 64; # /64 is a standard size IPv6 subnet as defined by the IETF.
}
else if splittedLength == 2 then # [ ip subnet ]
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I think we should be stricter with the user input and don't silently just set some prefix but instead fail saying that it's not a cidr address.
Also, usually the assumption I'm familiar with if you just don't specify a prefix is that you get a /128.

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I agree, 128 sounds more logical if prefix length is omitted.

I think we should be stricter with the user input and don't silently just set some prefix but instead fail saying that it's not a cidr address.

I added one fromString function and user can use both default and cidr notation. I don't see a reason to create two separate API functions like fromString and fromCidrString, because this can be easily observed from the passed string - if it contains a /, then we try to parse it as cidr notation.

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Co-authored-by: lucasew <lucas59356@gmail.com>
Add a library function to parse and validate an IPv6 address from a
string. It can parse the first two versions of an IPv6 address according
to https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc4291#section-2.2. The third
form "x:x:x:x:x:x.d.d.d.d" is not yet implemented. Optionally parser can accept prefix length (128 is default).

Add shell script network.sh to test IPv6 parser functionality.
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@infinisil as a lib code owner, do you want to give this a review before we merge it?

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@Janik-Haag Janik-Haag merged commit c20399e into NixOS:master Jul 11, 2024
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