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Solved grammar mistakes, justifies sentences, updated home page content. #35

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Solved grammar mistakes, justifies sentences, updated home page content.
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Merge branch 'master' of https://github.com/Yutyo/legesher-dot-io
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Expand Up @@ -222,7 +222,11 @@ <h5 class="definition"><code><i>[ le&middot;ga&middot;shEr ]</i> &nbsp;&nbsp;
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<h3 class="feature-title">Develop</h3>
<p class="text-sm">Innovation, creativity, and collaboration should never be lost in translation, that’s why we created Legesher!

<p class="text-sm">Innovation, creativity, and collaboration should never be lost in translation. That’s why we created Legesher!



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Please explain the purpose of the addition of these newlines in both this section and in lines 293-295

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Sorry, I haven't made those gaps originally. Github done that due to merge conflict.

</br></br>If you can’t fly yet, then you should “run” with our developer tools, as they take the alternate way around the spoken language barrier in developing code.</p>
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<h3 class="feature-title">Support</h3>
<p class="text-sm">We're always wanting to add new spoken and programming languages to our repository. Please lege-<u>share</u> our mission.
</br></br>From beginners learning how to code to collaborating with diverse teams around the world, Legesher connects us all.</p>
<p class="text-sm">We always want to add new spoken and programming languages to our repository. Please lege-<u>share</u> our mission.
</br></br>From beginners to professionals, learning how to code to collaborating with diverse teams around the world, Legesher connects us all.</p>
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You're on the right track, let's refine this a little more.

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sentence's purpose is to encourage new dialect translations to be added / reviewed.
The second sentence is to showcase the different use cases of the tool:

  • people just starting to learn how to code
  • professional developers collaborating in (diverse) teams

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<h2 class="section-title mt-0">Stay in the know</h2>

<h2 class="section-title mt-0">Be notified</h2>

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Thanks for the suggestion 👍, but I prefer the prior version of the copy for this section.

<p class="section-paragraph">Legesher will be hatching beta soon. Sign up for updates on when Legesher will be welcomed into this world - and how you can help!</p>
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