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N20: Release #583
N20: Release #583
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I used the wrong plurality, oops! Everything looks really good otherwise. 🙂
This contradicts the guidelines, I think. Shouldn't be written as "our".
Has both the image as a link, and the link in the image caption. Should the caption just say "click on the image to see the video", or the image be non-link instead?
The image here doesn't need to be so big, since it's just a logo, it doesn't show any actual rendering. Honestly, this entry is also a bit fishy... The news for Emerald are just these two tiny lines:
While everything else is self-promotion and general information. I think the newsletter should put a stronger focus on the "news" part, and prevent parties from just using it to remind about themselves. I.e. something like "your news need to be at least as big as the general description" rule. Similar concern could be applied to "Quinn" entry, although to a much lesser degree. The "bevy" entry style is what I find to be the best, and every entry should try to follow the format. In "wgpu" entry, something goes wrong about the image caption, it's not centered.
Would be nice to codify this part (i.e. with "`")
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@kvark, I've addressed most of the suggestions, thanks!
This is the first newsletter issue that features Emerald's entry. It's ok that it focuses on a general overview.
Same with Quinn. |
⏲️ Merging in 15 minutes. |
Preview (4d55e74): https://rust-gamedev-preview.netlify.app/posts/newsletter-020
Everyone is invited to review!
⏲️ Merging this in ~4/5 hours if there're no objections.
Part of #531