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That sentence make me read it a few times before properly understanding it

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@@ -791,8 +791,7 @@ trait Foo {
fn bar(&self);
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// we now declare a function which takes an object with Foo trait implemented
// as parameter
// we now declare a function which takes an object implementing the Foo trait
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"that implements the Foo trait" is probably the right... tense..?

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I think this is correct, and it sounds better anyways... having which and that in a sentence sounds awkward.

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I don't really agree; but I do agree that this is unambiguously an improvement over the old wording.

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Gankra commented Jul 11, 2015

@bor r+ rollup

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@bors: r=gankro rollup

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bors commented Jul 11, 2015

📌 Commit ef8c377 has been approved by gankro

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Gankra commented Jul 12, 2015

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Manishearth added a commit to Manishearth/rust that referenced this pull request Jul 12, 2015
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That sentence make me read it a few times before properly understanding it
bors added a commit that referenced this pull request Jul 12, 2015
@bors bors merged commit ef8c377 into rust-lang:master Jul 12, 2015
@tshepang tshepang deleted the more-simple-explanation branch July 13, 2015 08:15
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