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22875 Add API Calls when clicking “Reveal details” buttons #29017

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This PR add a call to the Expensify API to upon the tap on card "Reveal Details" button, to get the that card details and display it to the user.
The call is done locally and saved in components state, and not to Onyx for security reasons.
When the call progresses, the loading indicator is displayed in the button and the button is disabled to prevent concurrent calls.
There's also error handling displaying the error message under the MenuItem.
To test fully this feature we would need a way to add a real virtual card to the account. Currently we can only test that call has been made and also test the error handling.
Mocking the success response locally is also possible.
Here's a mocked happy path scenario:

happy.path.mov

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$ #22875
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  • same as QA steps
  • Verify that no errors appear in the JS console

Offline tests

QA Steps

  • open the web app and navigate to /settings/wallet/card/expensify (you'll see "not found" page)
  • in the JS console run the following code
Onyx.merge(`cardList`, {
    5678: {
	cardID: 5678,
	state: 4,
	bank: '1000',
	availableSpend: 10000,
	domainName: 'Expensify',
	lastFourPAN: '2345',
	isVirtual: true,
    },
});
  • Click on Reveal Details
  • A loading indicator should appear on the button
  • Observe the network console that the correct request is made
  • An error should appear under this menu item, as the card is fake
  • Verify that no errors appear in the JS console

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import lodashGet from 'lodash/get';
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Nothing should change in this file?

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you're right!

error: string;
};

type Action = {type: 'START'} | {type: 'SUCCESS'; payload: State['details']} | {type: 'FAIL'; payload: string};
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nit, Id move 'START', 'SUCCESS', 'FAIL' to some kind of const variable

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it's TS typed, so the right values should be autocompleted by the IDE, hence no constants needed imo.

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Card page is in .js tho. Im not sure if any checks happen there when dispatching actions

};
};
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I think it should be named isLoading

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MrMuzyk commented Oct 9, 2023

Would it be possible to get some videos from happy path too?

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Thanks for the changes! Unfortunately, it is not yet ready...

Please check the documentation for the App architecture. The PR is running counter to several foundational designs that will hopefully be more clear after reading the following:

https://github.com/Expensify/App/tree/main#philosophy
https://github.com/Expensify/App/blob/main/contributingGuides/API.md
https://github.com/Expensify/App/blob/main/contributingGuides/OFFLINE_UX.md

Let me know if there are any questions

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import PropTypes from 'prop-types';
import React, {useState} from 'react';
import React, {useReducer} from 'react';
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I don't think we should start with useReducer. We have avoided it until now and it looks like the incorrect pattern for what we are trying to achieve here.

@@ -18,6 +18,10 @@ import styles from '../../../styles/styles';
import * as CardUtils from '../../../libs/CardUtils';
import Button from '../../../components/Button';
import CardDetails from './WalletPage/CardDetails';
// eslint-disable-next-line rulesdir/no-api-in-views
import * as API from '../../../libs/API';
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This is here for a reason. If you want to call an API you need to create an "action" in the Card.js file

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@marcaaron Thanks for clarifying some stuff. Working on the changes now.

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@marcaaron made some fixes, please have a look

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Thank you for the changes!

I will do some local testing.

API.makeRequestWithSideEffects('RevealVirtualCardDetails', {cardID})
.then((response) => {
if (response.jsonCode !== CONST.JSON_CODE.SUCCESS) {
reject(response.message || Localize.translateLocal('cardPage.cardDetailsLoadingFailure'));
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I think we should not return the response.message error. It could be anything. Same with the catch below. Just return the default translated error in either case since the user will end up seeing this.

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@rushatgabhane Any status? The PR is related to our product roadmap and needs priority.

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got it! reviewing

@@ -843,6 +843,7 @@ export default {
revealDetails: 'Reveal details',
copyCardNumber: 'Copy card number',
},
cardDetailsLoadingFailure: 'An error occurred loading card details, please try again.',
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I think this reads better

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cardDetailsLoadingFailure: 'An error occurred loading card details, please try again.',
cardDetailsLoadingFailure: 'An error occurred while loading the card details. Please try again.',

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I assumed this copy was already approved by marketing.

@lukemorawski @MrMuzyk @grgia is this wrong?

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There's no error message copy for this in the Design Doc @marcaaron

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Ok I think we need to get the copy looked at. All copy needs to be approved. 🙃

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@lukemorawski am i missing something? are there any prerequisities to test this PR?

Bug:
Steps:

  1. navigate to /settings/wallet/card/expensify
  2. run in JS console
Onyx.merge(`cardList`, {
    5678: {
	cardID: 5678,
	state: 4,
	bank: '1000',
	availableSpend: 10000,
	domainName: 'Expensify',
	lastFourPAN: '2345',
	isVirtual: true,
    },
});
  1. Click on Reveal Details

Expected: Network request is made

Actual: no request is made, and we have a console error : TypeError: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading 'revealVirtualCardDetails') at Object.handleRevealDetails [as onPress] (ExpensifyCardPage.js:77:9)

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@grgia yep

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@rushatgabhane Are you on the checklist for this one?

Co-authored-by: Rushat Gabhane <rushatgabhane@gmail.com>
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updated @rushatgabhane

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rushatgabhane commented Oct 21, 2023

@lukemorawski am i missing something? I don't see the card.

steps:

  1. go to settings/wallet/card/expensify
  2. in console, merge cardList

I'm on the latest commit and re-ran npm ci

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grgia commented Oct 23, 2023

@rushatgabhane the domain check is case sensitive, could you try changing the data to:

Onyx.merge(`cardList`, {
    [5678]: {
	"cardID": 5678,
	"state": 4,
	"bank": 'Expensify Card',
	"availableSpend": 10000,
	"domainName": 'expensify',
	"lastFourPAN": '2345',
	"isVirtual": true,
    },
});

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@grgia LGTM!

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grgia commented Oct 25, 2023

Hey @rushatgabhane we've decided to move the error handling into a follow up PR, would you mind doing a final pass through on the final branch?

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rushatgabhane commented Oct 25, 2023

we've decided to move the error handling into a follow up PR,

cool

Code LGTM! The promise can be removed later

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grgia commented Oct 25, 2023

Sounds good! added removing the promise to the issue as well - #30329

@marcaaron marcaaron merged commit 65d4e2b into Expensify:main Oct 25, 2023
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🚀 Deployed to staging by https://github.com/marcaaron in version: 1.3.91-0 🚀

platform result
🤖 android 🤖 success ✅
🖥 desktop 🖥 success ✅
🍎 iOS 🍎 success ✅
🕸 web 🕸 success ✅

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🚀 Deployed to production by https://github.com/marcaaron in version: 1.3.91-8 🚀

platform result
🤖 android 🤖 success ✅
🖥 desktop 🖥 success ✅
🍎 iOS 🍎 success ✅
🕸 web 🕸 success ✅

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